One thing I learned about you is that you are a farm gal! Your family is similar than mine because we both have the hard-working mentality, even though we are different in that we don't have a farm at home! The best thing about your story is the pictures that went along with the story. I liked being able to visualize what you were talking about! :) One thing you could change is the wording on the "Irish Plum's" page. Also, you may want to check the zoom's so that all of the words appear before the next page comes up! Other than that, it was a great story :)
A line of your poem that I especially liked was the "I can do it myself stubborness." That definately applies to me as well. It seems as though we are both country girl. The only thing that I would change would be how long your words are up on each slide and the zoom settings. Sometimes it was hard for me to read, because the zoom would start at the end of a sentence and wouldn't show the whole sentence for a long enough time to read. Over all, I liked it.
One thing I learned about you is that you were raised on a farm. This is some what similar to my family. I was never raised on a farm but both my parents were and now me and my husband own one ourselves. I also understand what you mean by hard work, because it is hard to keep up with every thing. The best thing about you video is the pictures. They go along great with the words. One thing I would change is the motion of each slide. Several of the slides cut the words off before you could read them and some of the slides you couldn’t see the words at all. If you fix this then I think this video will be perfect. The music, words and pictures are beautifully done (just a little mechanical adjustments).
One thing I learned about you is you love your family dearly and have strong faith. Your family is similar/different than mine because we lived on a farm as well. By the way, it is so funny, I almost mentioned tacos and spaghetti in my story too. The best thing about your digital story is that I really enjoyed the pictures that you chose to use. One think you could change is that the direction that some of the slides are going does not allow all the words to be seen.
One thing I learned about you is…you are from Preston County. Your family is similar/different than mine because... I also lived on a farm and had to drive the tractor. The first time I almost threw my sister off…on accident. The best thing about your digital story is….all the great pictures and the music. One thing you could change is......there is a typo in stubbornness.
One thing I learned about you is that you love spaghetti and tacos. Your family is similar to mine because I grew up on a farm too. The best thing about your digital story is the wonderful family photos. One thing you could change is there are a few typos in your slides.
One thing I learned about you is that you're Irish. How did I not know that??? lol Your family is similar than mine because of our values :) The best thing about your digital story is the picture of me. haha I'm kidding, the best part is that you get a very clear picture of who you are and where you're from when reading your poem. One think you could change is the motion of the slides :)
One thing I learned about you is... you were raised around animals. The youtube still frame is the pic with the goats Your family is similar/different than mine because...different because you seem to have really strong faith The best thing about your digital story is...really good photos One think you could change is......sometimes when the slides zoom it cuts off the words
One thing I learned about you is that you are a farm gal! Your family is similar than mine because we both have the hard-working mentality, even though we are different in that we don't have a farm at home! The best thing about your story is the pictures that went along with the story. I liked being able to visualize what you were talking about! :) One thing you could change is the wording on the "Irish Plum's" page. Also, you may want to check the zoom's so that all of the words appear before the next page comes up! Other than that, it was a great story :)
ReplyDeleteA line of your poem that I especially liked was the "I can do it myself stubborness." That definately applies to me as well. It seems as though we are both country girl. The only thing that I would change would be how long your words are up on each slide and the zoom settings. Sometimes it was hard for me to read, because the zoom would start at the end of a sentence and wouldn't show the whole sentence for a long enough time to read. Over all, I liked it.
ReplyDeleteOne thing I learned about you is that you were raised on a farm. This is some what similar to my family. I was never raised on a farm but both my parents were and now me and my husband own one ourselves. I also understand what you mean by hard work, because it is hard to keep up with every thing. The best thing about you video is the pictures. They go along great with the words. One thing I would change is the motion of each slide. Several of the slides cut the words off before you could read them and some of the slides you couldn’t see the words at all. If you fix this then I think this video will be perfect. The music, words and pictures are beautifully done (just a little mechanical adjustments).
ReplyDeleteOne thing I learned about you is you love your family dearly and have strong faith.
ReplyDeleteYour family is similar/different than mine because we lived on a farm as well. By the way, it is so funny, I almost mentioned tacos and spaghetti in my story too.
The best thing about your digital story is that I really enjoyed the pictures that you chose to use.
One think you could change is that the direction that some of the slides are going does not allow all the words to be seen.
One thing I learned about you is…you are from Preston County.
ReplyDeleteYour family is similar/different than mine because... I also lived on a farm and had to drive the tractor. The first time I almost threw my sister off…on accident.
The best thing about your digital story is….all the great pictures and the music.
One thing you could change is......there is a typo in stubbornness.
One thing I learned about you is that you love spaghetti and tacos.
ReplyDeleteYour family is similar to mine because I grew up on a farm too.
The best thing about your digital story is the wonderful family photos.
One thing you could change is there are a few typos in your slides.
One thing I learned about you is that you're Irish. How did I not know that??? lol
ReplyDeleteYour family is similar than mine because of our values :)
The best thing about your digital story is the picture of me. haha I'm kidding, the best part is that you get a very clear picture of who you are and where you're from when reading your poem.
One think you could change is the motion of the slides :)
One thing I learned about you is... you were raised around animals. The youtube still frame is the pic with the goats
ReplyDeleteYour family is similar/different than mine because...different because you seem to have really strong faith
The best thing about your digital story is...really good photos
One think you could change is......sometimes when the slides zoom it cuts off the words